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Your submission at Articles for creation: Beyond Shadowgate (2024) (September 27)
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This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
The comment the reviewer left was:
- in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
- reliable
- secondary
- independent of the subject
Great draft, well put together and almost there. Just needs a few tweaks to de-emphasize non-WP:RS sources and hopefully another RS review. It's fine to use GOG and Steam as primary sources, but I'd avoid MobyGames and StrategyWiki as WP:USERG. Also, you may have noticed that Retro8BitShop has just basically republished the Retronauts review with different phrasing, and shouldn't be included at all. I think with AGH, Retronauts and HG101 as the key three sources here, this narrowly edges to notability. AGH looks legit, but isn't really a WP:VG/S source and is from an anonymous writer called Beau, which is a red flag given the site seems to invite applications from writers with no previous experience. A to J Connections looks to be pretty unreliable as a review source. Any more coverage out there? Also remember you can use < ref name = > to cite the same reference in multiple places to avoid duplicate citations.
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Hello, Josjosjos87!
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