Talk:Typhoon Tip
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[change source]- Please provide the exact version and not a link to the article itself. Griffinofwales (talk) 20:51, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
PGA comments
[change source]- designation - not really simple. Link perhaps to simpleWT (I can help with creation).
- injured - perhaps "hurt". I think this is easier.
- 42 deaths, and shipwrecks - the comma looks overdue to me.
- Because Roger was so close - What/Who is Roger?
- Well, the article mentions "Tropical Storm Roger" just a couple sentences before. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:59, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
- Typhoon Tip very quickly strengthened - the very is really needed?
- Impact section: also the injured (see above)
- which is very high for a tropical cyclone - The very.
Looks fine to me at all. --Barras (talk) 20:44, 28 November 2009 (UTC)
- Hey, thanks for the comments! I've done most of that and left one comment above. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:59, 30 November 2009 (UTC)